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Why Scripting a Sales Video Feels So Hard (And How to Fix It)

Adam Hunt
Adam Hunt
Founder and Head of Growth, White Label Comedy

Why is scripting a sales video so hard?

Because you are doing it from scratch, on a blank page, trying to compress an entire sales message into a few minutes while deciding what to say, in what order, and how to keep it engaging. The fix is not more willpower, it is a framework: a proven structure that already knows the running order, so you just fill in your specifics.

What a good sales video actually does

The right kind of video flips your ideal customer out of passive research mode, where they scan the page hunting for reasons this might not be for them, into active consumption mode, where you have their full attention on your sales message.

That is why a good Mini VSL helps the buyers who genuinely need what you are selling understand that they need it, in record time.

So why does nobody have one?

Yet so many business owners have no video on their sales pages at all. The reason is simple: it can feel impossible to even know where to begin.

You sit down, open a blank Google Doc, and type: "Hi, I'm Brian, co-founder of SporkInvestors, the only investment platform that doubles as a handy spoon and fork combo." You hate every word. Delete, delete, delete. You go and make a coffee. You come back ready to start over.

"Right. PAS. Problem, Agitate, Solution. Let's go." But which problem? You solve twelve of them. And how exactly do you agitate the pain without sounding like a pushy salesman?

Three hours later you have 200 words that read like the script for 2003's most underwhelming animated explainer video, and the dawning realisation that if you turn the camera on, you will not even want to watch it back, let alone publish it.

The real reason it is so hard

Here is the thing. It is hard because you are starting from scratch.

On that blank page you are trying to compress an entire sales message into a bite-sized video that captures all the important bits without boring your buyers into bouncing. That is a lot to hold in your head at once.

But it does not need to be this hard. You are not delivering a TED Talk. You are not making a feature-length documentary. You are just organising the most persuasive insights you already have into a simple script.

The fix: stop starting from a blank page

When you have the right framework for that script, the whole thing gets dramatically easier.

Instead of inventing the structure every time, you borrow one that already works: a fill-in-the-blanks template where every line has a job, the persuasive flow is built in, and all you add is your audience, your problem and your solution. The script more or less assembles itself.

Meet Brian

The other half of a Mini VSL that converts is the entertainment that keeps people watching, and that is where Brian, our AI Comedy Marketing Machine, comes in.

Brian takes the plain version of your message and helps you make it genuinely entertaining, using the same comedy frameworks our writers rely on, so your script holds attention all the way to the call to action.

Try Brian and never stare at a blank page again.

Adam Hunt
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Adam Hunt

Founder and Head of Growth at White Label Comedy. He spends his days convincing serious brands that funny is the most profitable thing they're not doing.

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